-tartan high has a stealing problem.
--during the fist year I was at tartan our math teacher informed us of some pass graphing calculator poning. they were being stolen from every one and everywhere. later on that year the school made an anoucement about the situation. our teachers made us register our calculator numbers to keep track of them if they were every missing. and during this while i was eating lunch a monitor was hanging around my table because my friend has left her ipod out in the open. she informed me that there have been ipod stealing laterly and should be careful. people sometimes would leave their things alone and get their things stolen. sometimes they would forget were they placed it and someone else picks it up.
---to solve this people just have to be careful on where they put their things and keep them whith them at all times. and be resposible.
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Wow MV nice work on the problem-solution thing. The only things that would help here are to label the parts and to spell pawn correctly. Hopefully someone else will comment on your blog and give you some more evidence or contributing factors. Again, thanks for keeping up with the assignment and working so hard. -- Mr. H
hello muakong! wassup???
anyhoo, to describe some advice for your blog, for the opening statement/the problem, I think you could be a little more specific->> you started talking about calculators or ipods, so that could be changed into 'Tartan has a problem in which students increasingly steal technological devices.'... perhaps??? lol I don't know if you'd wanna copy me or not, just a suggestion. and for evidence, possibly you could go to the lost and found (or whoever you could ask??) and get some more information on exactly (around) how many calc's/phones/ipods have been stolen this year. that's pretty crazy and I don't know if anyone would know, but it may be helpful to have some numbers. it's good you have some instances that you've encountered dealing with theft at Tartan.* for contr. factors, you could write more about kids not caring for their things, leaving them around, not caring about schoolstuff. that's all my brain is juicing right now. but much luck. like it a lot. ->> peace ->>mara
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